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2018-12-12 · 첨삭 강사 May

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1) We stayed inside, (because) the storm. 2) i wanted to stay longer, (because of) i was really enjoying the party. 3) Amanda stayed at home (as) her illness. 4) Her lateness was (due to) a terrible traffic jam. 5) (Owing to) flights ave cheaper in the winter, we decided to travel then. 6) (As) she hated cats, she wasn't happy when her husband bought three. 7) John didn't go to work, (Owing to) his illness. 8)(Due to) Lucy was very tired, she went to bed early. 9) (Owing to) his late night, john missed his train. 10) Lucy was very unhappy, (Owing to) she missed James.

강사 첨삭

Hi Sophie! Please check the corrections below. Anyway, I\'d like you to know that I\'m always happy

talking to you. Have a good afternoon! ^^

~~May~~

1) We stayed inside, (because) the storm.

>> We stayed inside, BECAUSE OF the storm.
 2) i wanted to stay longer, (because of) i was really enjoying the party.

>> I wanted to stay longer, BECAUSE I was really enjoying the party.
 3) Amanda stayed at home DUE TO her illness.
4) Her lateness was (due to) a terrible traffic jam.

>> CORRECT
 5) (Owing to) flights ave cheaper in the winter, we decided to travel then.

>> SINCE flights have cheaper in the winter, we decided to travel then.
 6) (As) she hated cats, she wasn\'t happy when her husband bought three.

>> CORRECT
 7) John didn\'t go to work, (Owing to) his illness.

>> CORRECT
 8)(Due to) Lucy was very tired, she went to bed early.

>> BECAUSE Lucy was very tired, she went to bed early.
 9) (Owing to) his late night, john missed his train.

>> CORRECT
 10) Lucy was very unhappy, (Owing to) she missed James.

>> Lucy was very unhappy, FOR she missed James.


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