homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Irene!
I really happy to hear your voice again.
As I told you, I have a sore throat and I am in bad condition cause of cold. I think I need to take a rest.
Be careful not to catch a cold.Irene !
ESSAY: What’s one thing you couldn’t live without? Why?
This question is so abstract.
To tell about valuable thing to me,
I cannot live without love.
I have grown with taking love and I am getting old with giving love now.
My parents were not a kind of loving people, therefore I were always hunger for love.
When I fell in love for the first time, I knew how I am eager for love.
Still, I express my love and say to my husband 'I love you, do you love me?' without hesitation. certainly my husband is shy but I know that he likes it.
I love my puppy Nana also. I always rub my cheek to Nana's cheek whispering ' I love you'
Someone says, A dog is the only thing on earth that loves you more than he loves himself.
Let's love, it is too short life to love as much as we can.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름]! Thank God you\'re back. I know it\'s a busy month for most Korean workers. I know it\'s really easy to catch a cold these days, even in my country. I just feel lucky that I haven\'t contracted the flu virus yet. I cringe at that thought of getting sick. I don\'t easily get sick but once I get it, it takes months for me to get over it. ^_^ Get well Ms. [이름]!
~T. IRENE~
Hi Irene!
I really happy to hear your voice again.
>>> I\'m really happy to hear your voice again.
As I told you, I have a sore throat and I am in bad condition cause of cold.
>>> As I told you already, I have a sore throat and I am in a bad condition because of colds.
I think I need to take a rest.
>>> Correct.
Be careful not to catch a cold.Irene !
>>> Correct.
ESSAY: What’s one thing you couldn’t live without? Why?
This question is so abstract.
>>> Correct.
To tell about valuable thing to me, I cannot live without love.
>>> The most valuable thing for me that I cannot live without is love.
I have grown with taking love and I am getting old with giving love now.
>>> I grew up loving and being loved; and I believe that I will grow old in the same way.
My parents were not a kind of loving people, therefore I were always hunger for love.
>>> My parents were not physically open when it comes to loving me so I have always hungered for love.
When I fell in love for the first time, I knew how I am eager for love.
>>> When I fell in love the first time, I knew how eager I am for love.
Still, I express my love and say to my husband \'I love you, do you love me?\' without hesitation.
>>> I, then, without hesitation expressed my love to my husband verbally or by saying \"I love you\".
certainly my husband is shy but I know that he likes it.
>>> I know my husband is quite shy, as Korean men are, but I know he likes to hear that.
I love my puppy Nana also.
>>> Correct.
I always rub my cheek to Nana\'s cheek whispering \' I love you\'
>>> I always rub our cheeks together and say \'I love you\'.
Someone says, A dog is the only thing on earth that loves you more than he loves himself.
>>> Someone said that the dog is the only one in the world who will love you more than he loves himself.
Let\'s love, it is too short life to love as much as we can.
>>> Let\'s spread love. Life is too short so we have to love as much as we can.
~T. IRENE~
Hi Irene!
I really happy to hear your voice again.
>>> I\'m really happy to hear your voice again.
As I told you, I have a sore throat and I am in bad condition cause of cold.
>>> As I told you already, I have a sore throat and I am in a bad condition because of colds.
I think I need to take a rest.
>>> Correct.
Be careful not to catch a cold.Irene !
>>> Correct.
ESSAY: What’s one thing you couldn’t live without? Why?
This question is so abstract.
>>> Correct.
To tell about valuable thing to me, I cannot live without love.
>>> The most valuable thing for me that I cannot live without is love.
I have grown with taking love and I am getting old with giving love now.
>>> I grew up loving and being loved; and I believe that I will grow old in the same way.
My parents were not a kind of loving people, therefore I were always hunger for love.
>>> My parents were not physically open when it comes to loving me so I have always hungered for love.
When I fell in love for the first time, I knew how I am eager for love.
>>> When I fell in love the first time, I knew how eager I am for love.
Still, I express my love and say to my husband \'I love you, do you love me?\' without hesitation.
>>> I, then, without hesitation expressed my love to my husband verbally or by saying \"I love you\".
certainly my husband is shy but I know that he likes it.
>>> I know my husband is quite shy, as Korean men are, but I know he likes to hear that.
I love my puppy Nana also.
>>> Correct.
I always rub my cheek to Nana\'s cheek whispering \' I love you\'
>>> I always rub our cheeks together and say \'I love you\'.
Someone says, A dog is the only thing on earth that loves you more than he loves himself.
>>> Someone said that the dog is the only one in the world who will love you more than he loves himself.
Let\'s love, it is too short life to love as much as we can.
>>> Let\'s spread love. Life is too short so we have to love as much as we can.
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