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Hi Sir [이름]! Thank you again for completing your homework. Your answer made me think about my own choices. I think that you have a brilliant idea. I should consider reading the book first watching the movie next time. Anyway, I am glad to see that your writing skill is definitely on point. You have made a good introduction and a convincing content. I liked it! Look below for the corrections I made for you. ~~T. Dee

In fact, there are many cases of making a best-selling book into a movie. 

>>It is true that there are already many cases where a best-selling book was made into a movie. 
A typical movie is Harry Potter, which is the movie turn a novel\'Harry Potter’ written by J.K Rowling into a movie.

>>A typical example is the Harry Potter series, which was written by J.K Rowling and was turned into a movie.

Not only books but also movies have succeeded in box office worldwide.

>>Not only books but also movies have succeeded  in worldwide popularity.
I think that if a book is made into a movie, I should read a book first.

>>I think that if a book is made into a movie, I should read the book first.
Because, when people read books, they imagine many things, and the things they imagine are different as each person.

>>Because, when people read books, they imagine many things, and the things they imagine are different from another person.

In addition, people have a different imagination depending on their experiences.

>>In addition, people have different imaginations depending on their experiences.
If we see the movie first, it limits the width of the imagination. 

>>If we see the movie first, it limits our scope of imagination. 
Therefore, making a book into a movie is a very difficult thing to satisfy everyone\'s imagination.

>>This is why turning a book into a movie is challenging as to satisfying everyone else\'s imagination.