homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I will be___ bacause I ________.
I will be studying English very hard before my working holiday because I want to make many friends, their cultures, get a job well and I reaaly want to adapt there by myself.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]. ^^
I will try my best to be your teacher and study buddy!
You will do great in Australia, I am sure of it. ^^
~~t. Ally
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I will be studying English very hard before my working holiday because I want to make many friends, their cultures, get a job well and I reaaly want to adapt there by myself.
>> I will be studying English very hard before my working holiday because I want to meet many friends, learn about their cultures, get a good job, and I really want to adapt well by myself.
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