homework
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If you could exchange lives with someone, who would it be and why?
If I could exchange my life with any other person, I want to exchange it with an astronaut.
I interested the galaxy and I also enjoy reading articles about it.
One of my dreams is going to space if I could.
I hope to be there before i die for once.
강사 첨삭
That\'s a great idea [이름]!
I would like to go to space too!^^
How awesome would that be, right?
~~t. Ally
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If I could exchange my life with any other person, I want to exchange it with an astronaut.
>> CORRECT!
I interested the galaxy and I also enjoy reading articles about it.
>> I\'m interested in the galaxy and I also enjoy readying articles about it.
One of my dreams is going to space if I could.
>> One of my dreams is to go to space if I could.
I hope to be there before i die for once.
>> I hope I could go there at least once before I die.
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