homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Irene!
I am busy thesedays, So,If I quit or skip our class without a saying good-bye, please don't be disappointed. I will come back as soon as possible.
Enjoy your rest of day, Irene!
ESSAY: What gives meaning to your life? What inspires you to wake up everyday and go on with life?
This question makes me serious and think a lot.
I cannot say stately that I am living for my family or my careers.
I would rather say that I live now for making money frankkly .
I feel so shame on me now.
I think that I must have had a purpose for my life after I graduated, but now I feel that I lose my way and just adjust myself to the everyday same routine.
Even more, my job is not the what I wanted to get, therefore,I feel less achievements and satisfactions than others does.
I am far from what I really wanted to be.
But I still do one thing what I really liked to do.
It is a 'speaking Englsih'.
English means above of just a kind of languages to me.
It is a prid to me!
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름]! Thanks for notifying me about that. Then I won\'t have to wonder what\'s happening with you. I know a lot of people are busy nowadays because of end of the year activities and events. Try not to stress yourself much. It won\'t do you good. ^_^
~T. Irene~
Hi Irene!
I am busy these days, so if I quit or skip our class without a saying good-bye, please don\'t be disappointed.
>>> Correct.
I will come back as soon as possible.
>>> Correct.
Enjoy your rest of day, Irene!
>>> Enjoy the rest of the day, Irene!
ESSAY: What gives meaning to your life? What inspires you to wake up everyday and go on with life?
This question makes me serious and think a lot.
>>> This question makes me think seriously or deeply.
I cannot say stately that I am living for my family or my careers.
>>> I cannot honestly say that I am living for my family or my career.
I would rather say that I live now for making money frankkly .
>>> Frankly speaking, I am living for money.
I feel so shame on me now.
>>> That\'s makes me feel ashamed of myself.
I think that I must have had a purpose for my life after I graduated, but now I feel that I lose my way and just adjust myself to the everyday same routine.
>>> I think that there must have been a purpose in my life after I graduated but somewhat, I got lost along the way and my life has fallen into a routine.
Even more, my job is not the what I wanted to get, therefore,I feel less achievements and satisfactions than others does.
>>> What makes it worse is my job is not what I have wanted to have therefore I feel less satisfied compared to others.
I am far from what I really wanted to be.
>>> Correct.
But I still do one thing what I really liked to do.
>>> But I am still doing something I really wanted.
It is a \'speaking Englsih\'.
>>> It is \'speaking in English\'.
English means above of just a kind of languages to me.
>>> English is more than a language for me.
It is a prid to me!
>>> I am actually proud of my English skill.
>>> It is something I am proud of.
~T. Irene~
Hi Irene!
I am busy these days, so if I quit or skip our class without a saying good-bye, please don\'t be disappointed.
>>> Correct.
I will come back as soon as possible.
>>> Correct.
Enjoy your rest of day, Irene!
>>> Enjoy the rest of the day, Irene!
ESSAY: What gives meaning to your life? What inspires you to wake up everyday and go on with life?
This question makes me serious and think a lot.
>>> This question makes me think seriously or deeply.
I cannot say stately that I am living for my family or my careers.
>>> I cannot honestly say that I am living for my family or my career.
I would rather say that I live now for making money frankkly .
>>> Frankly speaking, I am living for money.
I feel so shame on me now.
>>> That\'s makes me feel ashamed of myself.
I think that I must have had a purpose for my life after I graduated, but now I feel that I lose my way and just adjust myself to the everyday same routine.
>>> I think that there must have been a purpose in my life after I graduated but somewhat, I got lost along the way and my life has fallen into a routine.
Even more, my job is not the what I wanted to get, therefore,I feel less achievements and satisfactions than others does.
>>> What makes it worse is my job is not what I have wanted to have therefore I feel less satisfied compared to others.
I am far from what I really wanted to be.
>>> Correct.
But I still do one thing what I really liked to do.
>>> But I am still doing something I really wanted.
It is a \'speaking Englsih\'.
>>> It is \'speaking in English\'.
English means above of just a kind of languages to me.
>>> English is more than a language for me.
It is a prid to me!
>>> I am actually proud of my English skill.
>>> It is something I am proud of.
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