homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Irene!
It's freezing out there. I am wearing 3 layers of clothing now - underclothes, high neck sweater and gosse padding vest.
But I still feel cold and it's so dry because of heater. It will be colder tomorrow. Santa may not come to Korea with this cold weather. hihihi
Have a nice weekend and see you on Monday!
Ah~~please sing for me 'the 12days of Christmas' on Monday.
ESSAY: Would you rather live in the mountains or on the beach? Why?
If I have to choose one place,I would rather live on beach.
Because I am afraid of living in the mountains.
There are many dangerous animals and insects in the mountains.
And also I cannot climb well and fear of darkness.
I've heard that the sunset is faster in the mountains therefore, when we climb mountains, we have to climb down early.otherwise, we will lost way because of darkness.
although I live on beach, I also fear of many things from the sea.
But I know, at least snakes are not on the beach.
Ah~ I forget the sea sankes.T'T
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! Sure, I will sing the 12 Days of Christmas for you on Monday! Let\'s sing it together. ha ha ha
~T. Irene~
Hi Irene!
It\'s freezing out there.
>>> Correct.
I am wearing 3 layers of clothing now - underclothes, high neck sweater and gosse padding vest.
>>> I am wearing 3 layers of clothing now - underclothes, a high neck sweater and a goose padding vest.
But I still feel cold and it\'s so dry because of heater.
>>> But I still feel cold and it\'s so dry because of the heater.
It will be colder tomorrow.
>>> Correct.
Santa may not come to Korea with this cold weather. hihihi
>>> Correct.
Have a nice weekend and see you on Monday!
>>> Correct.
Ah~~please sing for me \'the 12days of Christmas\' on Monday.
>>> Correct.
ESSAY: Would you rather live in the mountains or on the beach? Why?
If I have to choose one place,I would rather live on beach.
>>> If I have to choose one place, I would rather live on the beach.
Because I am afraid of living in the mountains.
>>> Correct.
There are many dangerous animals and insects in the mountains.
>>> Correct.
And also I cannot climb well and fear of darkness.
>>> And also I cannot climb well and I fear the darkness.
I\'ve heard that the sunset is faster in the mountains therefore, when we climb mountains, we have to climb down early.otherwise, we will lost way because of darkness.
>>> I\'ve heard that sunset is faster in the mountains therefore, we also need to go down early or fast.
otherwise, we will lost way because of darkness.
>> Otherwise, we will lose our way because of the darkness.
although I live on beach, I also fear of many things from the sea.
>>> Although I live on the beach, I also fear many things from the sea.
But I know, at least snakes are not on the beach.
>>> But I know, at least there aren\'t any snakes on the beach.
Ah~ I forget the sea sankes.T\'T
>>> Ah~ I forgot the sea snakes. T\'T
~T. Irene~
Hi Irene!
It\'s freezing out there.
>>> Correct.
I am wearing 3 layers of clothing now - underclothes, high neck sweater and gosse padding vest.
>>> I am wearing 3 layers of clothing now - underclothes, a high neck sweater and a goose padding vest.
But I still feel cold and it\'s so dry because of heater.
>>> But I still feel cold and it\'s so dry because of the heater.
It will be colder tomorrow.
>>> Correct.
Santa may not come to Korea with this cold weather. hihihi
>>> Correct.
Have a nice weekend and see you on Monday!
>>> Correct.
Ah~~please sing for me \'the 12days of Christmas\' on Monday.
>>> Correct.
ESSAY: Would you rather live in the mountains or on the beach? Why?
If I have to choose one place,I would rather live on beach.
>>> If I have to choose one place, I would rather live on the beach.
Because I am afraid of living in the mountains.
>>> Correct.
There are many dangerous animals and insects in the mountains.
>>> Correct.
And also I cannot climb well and fear of darkness.
>>> And also I cannot climb well and I fear the darkness.
I\'ve heard that the sunset is faster in the mountains therefore, when we climb mountains, we have to climb down early.otherwise, we will lost way because of darkness.
>>> I\'ve heard that sunset is faster in the mountains therefore, we also need to go down early or fast.
otherwise, we will lost way because of darkness.
>> Otherwise, we will lose our way because of the darkness.
although I live on beach, I also fear of many things from the sea.
>>> Although I live on the beach, I also fear many things from the sea.
But I know, at least snakes are not on the beach.
>>> But I know, at least there aren\'t any snakes on the beach.
Ah~ I forget the sea sankes.T\'T
>>> Ah~ I forgot the sea snakes. T\'T
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