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강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I love the fall season too!
Sadly, I can only see it in pictures because we don\'t have it in the Philippines.
It\'s such a peaceful and colorful season. ^^
And I love your sentiments toward it.
~~t. Ally
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My favorite season is fall that many trees turn colorful.
>> My favorite season is fall, because many trees become colorful.
I like the cool weather and I like to wear a trench coat in that weather.
>> I like the cool weather and I like to wear trench coats in that kind of weather.
I feel little sentimental when I see wind blowing and falling leaves. :)
>> I feel a little sentimental when I see the wind blowing and the leaves falling. :)
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