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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름]!
You are always vocal about your love for traveling. I hope that you can travel the world when you become an adult. Enjoy the beauty of the world.
~T. Kelly^^
What are the three most important things for you to be happy?
Most important activities is abord trip.
>> Our most important activity is traveling abroad.
I like abord trip the most in my life,and I want to travel a lot when I will be adult.
>> I like traveling abroad the most. I want to travel more when I become an adult.
And second is food.
>> And I also like food.
I like eating all foods.
>> Correct.
And I like the Korean food the most than other food.
>> And I like Korean food more than other country\'s food.
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