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2018-12-17 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

학생이 쓴 원문

I am happy because ________________________________. I am happy because I had a chance to meet you.:) It's only been 1 month. But I can have very good teacher and a foriegn friend. I can learn many expressions, and I can learn about other cultures. I'm really glad to meet you. I'll keep studying hard. Even after I go to Austrailia, I want you to be my teacher :) I'll reenroll your class! See you in class.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!


This is so overwhelmingly sweet!

Thank you for sending me this composition. ^^

My heart is so full!

I am grateful and happy to have you as my student as well.

I enjoy talking about life with you.

I hope to be with you in your journey toward success! ^^

I will always be here to cheer you on.

See you in class! <3


~~t. Ally



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 I am happy because I had a chance to meet you.:)

>> CORRECT!


 It\'s only been 1 month.

>> CORRECT!


 But I can have very good teacher and a foriegn friend.

>> But I\'ve already gained a good teacher and a foreign friend.


 I can learn many expressions, and I can learn about other cultures.

>> I have learned many expressions and learned about other cultures as well.


 I\'m really glad to meet you.

>> CORRECT!]


 I\'ll keep studying hard.

>> CORRECT! 


 Even after I go to Austrailia, I want you to be my teacher :)
>> Even after I go to Australia, I still want you to be my teacher. :)


 I\'ll reenroll your class! See you in class.

>> CORRECT!

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