homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]. Thank you for this. I heard, in Korean society, neighbors don\'t usually know each other especially if they live in the big city. It\'s because people don\'t usually see each other due to very busy schedules.
- T. Beth
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yes, I met one neigbor through a hobby club.
>>> Yes, I met one neighbor through a hobby club.)
but, she is only one.
>>> However, I only met her.
she is not closed me as invite her. because usually I have no chance of meeting
>>> We are not that close for me to invite her because we usually don\'t have time to meet often.
(= I don\'t have chance of meetion.-> same mean?)
>>> I don\'t have chances to meet her.
I don\'t kow neighbors in same townhouse
>>> I don\'t know other neighbors in the same townhouse.
and they and I also don\'t try associate with each ohter.
>>> We don\'t even try to associate with each other.
I think korea socity is individualistic.
>>> I think the Korean society is very individualistic.
so, I don\'t invite neighbors to my house.
>>> CORRECT.
but my friends have come to my house.
>>> CORRECT. ( But my friends have come to my house.)
>>> OR: But my friends come to my house.
I invited them.
>>> CORRECT.
>>> OR: I sometimes invite them.
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