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2018-12-17 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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Do most people know their neighbors in your area? Do you sometimes invite neighbors to your house? yes, I met one neigbor through a hobby club. but, she is only one. she is not closed me as invite her. because usually I have no chance of meeting (= I don't have chance of meetion.-> same mean?) I don't kow neighbors in same townhouse and they and I also don't try associate with each ohter. I think korea socity is individualistic. so, I don't invite neighbors to my house. but my friends have come to my house. I invited them.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]. Thank you for this. I heard, in Korean society, neighbors don\'t usually know each other especially if they live in the big city. It\'s because people don\'t usually see each other due to very busy schedules.

- T. Beth

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yes, I met one neigbor through a hobby club.

>>>  Yes, I met one neighbor through a hobby club.)     
 but, she is only one.

>>>  However, I only met her.  

she is not closed me as invite her. because usually I have no chance of meeting

>>>  We are not that close for me to invite her because we usually don\'t have time to meet often.    

(= I don\'t have chance of meetion.-> same mean?)

>>>  I don\'t have chances to meet her.  

I don\'t kow neighbors in same townhouse
>>>  I don\'t know other neighbors in the same townhouse.    

and they and I also don\'t try associate with each ohter.
>>> We don\'t even try to associate with each other.    

I think korea socity is individualistic.
>>>  I think the Korean society is very individualistic.  
so, I don\'t invite neighbors to my house.
>>> CORRECT.     

but my friends have come to my house.

>>> CORRECT. ( But my friends have come to my house.)

>>> OR: But my friends come to my house.  

I invited them.

>>> CORRECT.

>>> OR: I sometimes invite them.    


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