homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Irene!
I caught a cold on last weekend. I felt pains in my rib because I coughed a lot. I had to lay down on the bed all day sweating and trambling, My husband was worried about me and took care of me.
He also cleaned house and did housechors alone. He is a good husband, Isn't he?
When I woke up this morning, I felt better and I get well now.
On a second thought, I'm always sick at night or on weekend.
I must be born to working.
Have a good day!
ESSAY: What’s the weirdest question you’ve been asked? What about the weirdest question you've ask anybody?
I am sorry but It doesn't ring a bell at all about this homework.
Someone asked me ' Are you a teacher?' or ' Are you single?'
those questions are not weird to me.
When I feel close with someone, I usually ask him/her ' Are you satisfied with your life? ' But this question is not also wired.
Ooh~ give me a tip!
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름]! Take care of your health. It\'s hard to get recover from illnesses these days because of the persistent cold weather. It was very sweet of your husband to take care of you. ^_^
~T. Irene~
Hi Irene!
I caught a cold on last weekend.
>>> I caught a cold last weekend.
I felt pains in my rib because I coughed a lot.
>>> I feel some pains in my chest from too much coughing.
I had to lay down on the bed all day sweating and trembling.
>>> Correct.
My husband was worried about me and took care of me.
>>> Correct.
He also cleaned house and did housechors alone.
>>> He also cleaned the house and did all the chores alone.
He is a good husband, isn\'t he?
>>> Correct.
When I woke up this morning, I felt better and I get well now.
>>> When I woke up this morning, I felt better and I knew I\'m getting well now.
On a second thought, I\'m always sick at night or on weekend.
>>> On a second thought, I\'ve always been sick at night or on weekends.
I must be born to working.
>>> I must have been born to work.
Have a good day!
>>> Correct.
ESSAY: What’s the weirdest question you’ve been asked? What about the weirdest question you\'ve ask anybody?
I am sorry but It doesn\'t ring a bell at all about this homework.
>>> I\'m sorry but I\'m not familiar with this type of question. I don\'t understand what it asks.
Someone asked me \'Are you a teacher?\' or \' Are you single?\' those questions are not weird to me.
>>> If someone asks me \'Are you a teacher?\' or \'Are you single?\', I would have been more familiar with those questions.
When I feel close with someone, I usually ask him/her \' Are you satisfied with your life? \' But this question is not also wired.
>>> When I am close with someone, I would usually ask him/her, \'Are you satisfied with your life?\', but I also don\'t find this question weird.
Ooh~ give me a tip!
>>> Correct.
~T. Irene~
Hi Irene!
I caught a cold on last weekend.
>>> I caught a cold last weekend.
I felt pains in my rib because I coughed a lot.
>>> I feel some pains in my chest from too much coughing.
I had to lay down on the bed all day sweating and trembling.
>>> Correct.
My husband was worried about me and took care of me.
>>> Correct.
He also cleaned house and did housechors alone.
>>> He also cleaned the house and did all the chores alone.
He is a good husband, isn\'t he?
>>> Correct.
When I woke up this morning, I felt better and I get well now.
>>> When I woke up this morning, I felt better and I knew I\'m getting well now.
On a second thought, I\'m always sick at night or on weekend.
>>> On a second thought, I\'ve always been sick at night or on weekends.
I must be born to working.
>>> I must have been born to work.
Have a good day!
>>> Correct.
ESSAY: What’s the weirdest question you’ve been asked? What about the weirdest question you\'ve ask anybody?
I am sorry but It doesn\'t ring a bell at all about this homework.
>>> I\'m sorry but I\'m not familiar with this type of question. I don\'t understand what it asks.
Someone asked me \'Are you a teacher?\' or \' Are you single?\' those questions are not weird to me.
>>> If someone asks me \'Are you a teacher?\' or \'Are you single?\', I would have been more familiar with those questions.
When I feel close with someone, I usually ask him/her \' Are you satisfied with your life? \' But this question is not also wired.
>>> When I am close with someone, I would usually ask him/her, \'Are you satisfied with your life?\', but I also don\'t find this question weird.
Ooh~ give me a tip!
>>> Correct.
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