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2018-12-18 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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I think my biggest \"life changing\" is \"NOW\" I talked about this story at monday class Ever before I trust with my friends and co-worker Now I didn\'t ever talked about personal issues with closed people in Korea except my familly Someday I wish to come out trust people in Korea whoever man or woman

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!


I hope you feel better about this problem soon. :(

With the right people, trust will be easy to give. ^^


~~t. Ally




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I think my biggest \"life changing\" is \"NOW\"

>> I think my biggest \"life changing\" moment is \"NOW\".


 I talked about this story at monday class

>> I talked about this story during our class last Monday.


 Ever before I trust with my friends and co-worker

>> I used to trust my friends and co-workers.


 Now I didn\'t ever talked about personal issues with closed people in Korea except my familly

>> Now I won\'t ever talk about personal issues with close-minded people in Korea, except for my family.


 Someday I wish to come out trust people in Korea whoever man or woman

>> Someday I wish I would be able to trust people in Korea again, whether it be a man or a woman.

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