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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!
I hope you feel better about this problem soon. :(
With the right people, trust will be easy to give. ^^
~~t. Ally
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I think my biggest \"life changing\" is \"NOW\"
>> I think my biggest \"life changing\" moment is \"NOW\".
I talked about this story at monday class
>> I talked about this story during our class last Monday.
Ever before I trust with my friends and co-worker
>> I used to trust my friends and co-workers.
Now I didn\'t ever talked about personal issues with closed people in Korea except my familly
>> Now I won\'t ever talk about personal issues with close-minded people in Korea, except for my family.
Someday I wish to come out trust people in Korea whoever man or woman
>> Someday I wish I would be able to trust people in Korea again, whether it be a man or a woman.
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