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2018-12-19 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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Q.If you were stuck on an island alone, what would you do? A.If I am alone on the island, I will find food in the wild and live hard. And of course I won't forget the rescue. And then you die.

강사 첨삭

Hey Cat!


That\'s a good idea. ^^

Try your best to stay alive, and do something so that rescuers will be able to track you down.

Build a fire or make giant letters using sticks and rocks.


~~t. Ally


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If I am alone on the island, I will find food in the wild and live hard. And of course I won\'t forget the rescue. And then you die.

>> If I am alone on an island, I will find food from the wild and try to live as long as I can. And of course, I won\'t forget about the rescue team. I hope I don\'t die.

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