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2018-12-19 · 첨삭 강사 Elisha

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What kind of problems does dishonesty cause? firstly, Good lies. It is wife food. making My wife food is not taste. but I said that It is delicious. secondly, when Baby did eat madicine, I say lie. when Baby ate madicine, I say giving present. but I does not present.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]ard! I\'m sure you could be one of these people someday. Don\'t give up! See you! ~T. Elisha

firstly, Good lies.

>> Firstly, there are good lies.

It is wife food. making My wife food is not taste. but I said that It is delicious.

>> If my wife cooks food, even if it doesn\'t taste good, I will say that it is delicious.
 secondly, when Baby did eat madicine, I say lie.

>> Secondly, to make my baby drink her medicine, I will lie.
 when Baby ate madicine, I say giving present. but I does not present.

>> I will tell her that I will give her a present if she drinks her medicine but in reality, I won\'t.

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