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2018-12-19 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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> Some people tend to snore, grit their teeth and even talk while sleeping. Do you have any weird or funny sleeping habits or have heard of any? I tend to snore when very tried, but there are no habits during sleeping except that. While searching sleeping habits, I found health analyse through it. People gritting their teeth and opening their eyes with half usually have hysteric characters, so they undergo difficulties for compromise and harmony. People who often dream and remember vividly have a character with sensitivity and artistic sense. But, if it is hard, people can undergo depression. My sleeping pose is like soldier pose that locate hands on hip. People having that habit usually have strong mental and don't like disturbance. Also, these people tend to believe themselves hard so they make other people trust them.

강사 첨삭

Hello Jin Young. Thank you for this. I heard, your sleeping behavior and mannerisms actually tells a lot about your character or personality. I don\'t know if it\'s accurate or reliable though, but it is interesting to know.

- T. Beth

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I tend to snore when very tried, but there are no habits during sleeping except that.

>>>  I tend to snore when I\'m very tried, but I don\'t have other sleeping habits aside from that 

While searching sleeping habits, I found health analyse through it.

>>> While searching for sleeping habits, I found health analysis from it.   

People gritting their teeth and opening their eyes with half usually have hysteric characters, so they undergo difficulties for compromise and harmony.

>>> People who grit their teeth and sleep with eyes half open usually have hysteric characters, so they undergo difficulties on compromising and harmony.   

People who often dream and remember vividly have a character with sensitivity and artistic sense.

>>> People who often dream and remember vividly have a character of sensitivity and artistic sense.    

But, if it is hard, people can undergo depression.

>>>  But, in worst cases, people can undergo depression. 

My sleeping pose is like soldier pose that locate hands on hip.

>>>  My sleeping position is like a soldier pose where my hands are on my hip.  

People having that habit usually have strong mental and don\'t like disturbance.

>>>  OR: People with that habit usually have strong mentality and don\'t like disturbance.  

Also, these people tend to believe themselves hard so they make other people trust them.

>>>  Also, these people tend to believe in themselves greatly so they make other people trust them.  


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