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2018-12-20 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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I've heard that there are different between their abilities like even though the brains of men are universallyl optimized for just doing one thing, they are weak for multi-tasking. Otherwise, the brains of women have opposite strength and weakness compared to the men's. From this difference, there are conflict between a girlfriend and a boyfriend because they can't understand why he or she couldn't do this like me? I wonder why god make us like this? If there is a reason for this, I want to know. Anyway, I'm not also good at doing multi tasking so whenever I try to doing two things in same time, there are many mistakes often. I think men and women need to understand and know they are not same.

강사 첨삭

Jay,

God made us unique individuals. No one is exactly the same, even twins. I think our differences make us interesting though it could also be a big challenge. That what make our lives an adventure!(\",)

~Lynn  

I\'ve heard that there are different between their abilities like even though the brains of men are universallyl optimized for just doing one thing, they are weak for multi-tasking.

>> I\'ve heard that there are difference between their abilities like even though the brains of men are universally optimized for just doing one thing, they are weak in multi-tasking.

Otherwise, the brains of women have opposite strength and weakness compared to the men\'s.

>> On the other hand, the brains of women have opposite strength and weakness compared to the men\'s.

From this difference, there are conflict between a girlfriend and a boyfriend because they can\'t understand why he or she couldn\'t do this like me?

>> From this difference, there are conflicts between a girlfriend and a boyfriend because they can\'t understand why he or she couldn\'t do this like me?

OR>> Because of this, many conflicts occur between couples because they couldn\'t understand their differences.

 I wonder why god make us like this? If there is a reason for this, I want to know.

>>  I wonder why God made us like this? If there is a reason for this, I want to know.

Anyway, I\'m not also good at doing multi tasking so whenever I try to doing two things in same time, there are many mistakes often.

>> Anyway, I\'m not also good at doing multi-tasking so whenever I try to do two things at the same time, I often commit many mistakes.

 I think men and women need to understand and know they are not same.

>> correct!

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