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2018-12-20 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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How do you choose a place to travel to? What things do you consider most? considering most about traveling place is new experience to me. I wnat that I don't have experienced, and I feel happy to this thing. I am impressed or I feel the moment by the TV or picture the contry. I thinking that I'd like to go to that contry like that. I set a place to go far contry as possible. because, my vacation's piriod is a liitle long and it is easy to go to a neighboring country. Before I get married, I want to go to many countries far away. I guess not free to travel long time when I get married. Of course, if can't go at all.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]. Thank you for this. Good idea! While you are still young and single, it is best to travel as much as you can.

- T. Beth

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considering most about traveling place is new experience to me.
>>>> Considering mostly about the place to travel to is a new experience for me.   
I wnat that I don\'t have experienced, and I feel happy to this thing.

>>>> I want to try those I haven\'t experienced before. I would feel happy about those things.    
I am impressed or I feel the moment by the TV or picture the contry.
>>>>  I am impressed and want to feel the moment when I see these places on TV or see pictures of the country.
I thinking that I\'d like to go to that contry like that.
>>>>  I would think of wanting to go to that country.  
I set a place to go far contry as possible.
because, my vacation\'s piriod is a liitle long and it is easy to go to a neighboring country.
>>>>  I set a place to go to a far country as possible because my vacation period is a little long and it is easy to go to a neighboring country.  
Before I get married, I want to go to many countries far away.

>>>>  CORRECT.  

I guess not free to travel long time when I get married. 

>>>>  I guess I would not have a lot of free time to travel for a long time when I get married.   
 Of course, if can\'t go at all.

>>>>  I might not even be able to go on a long vacation at all.  

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