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2018-12-20 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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Do you use, or have you ever used, any special methods that help you get to sleep? My method is drink warm milk before get sleep. If I do that, I can sleep better than before.I always listen to music when I'm bed. I think it helps little to get sleep better. But I always listen rep music so rep music is disturb my sleep. I want more methods so I can get sleep more earlier.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework ^^

I hope you are having a great night.

My method is drink warm milk before get sleep.

>> I drink warm milk before going to bed.

If I do that, I can sleep better than before.

>> I can sleep much better if I do that.

I always listen to music when I\'m bed.

>> I always listen to music when I\'m in bed.

I think it helps little to get sleep better. But I always listen rep
music so rep music is disturb my sleep.

>> I think it helps me a little to fall asleep but I always listen to rap music so it disturbs my sleep.

I want more methods so I can get sleep more earlier.

>> I want to know more methods so I can fall asleep earlier.

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