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2018-12-21 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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Because i want to talk foreigner well. When i meet foreigner, l can’t speak English well. So i must to learn English hardly. And someday i will interview people i like.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]. Thank you for sending this in. English is indeed the international language. Good luck!

- T. Beth

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Because i want to talk foreigner well.

>>>  Because I want to talk to foreigners well.

>>>  OR: Because I want to be able to communicate well with foreigners. 

When i meet foreigner, l can’t speak English well.

>>>  When I meet a foreigner, l can’t speak English well.  

So i must to learn English hardly.

>>>  So I must learn English hardly.

>>> OR: So, I must study English hard.  

And someday i will interview people i like.

>>>  CORRECY. (And someday I will interview people I like.)

>>>  OR: And hopefully I could someday interview people I like. 


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