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2018-12-21 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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> If you could be a good cook, what kind of cuisine would you like to be good at? (example: European cuisine, Chinese cuisine, Italian cuisine, Western cuisine, etc.) If I could be a good cook, I want to be good in European cuisine especially on France. French cuisines are famous among gourmets, and Guide Michelin arose from France, which have helped guide gourmets. In my taste, I like gratin with bread. Gratin is food roasting cheese or bread with this in oven. Because foods using potato have been developed in France, French make gratin food using potato and cream. It has soft and sweet taste because of cream and potato, and if there is only a oven, this food can be made easily so it is representative food in France. When I ate that with bread in restaurant in Korea for the first time, I could't forget this taste having soft and sweet flavor.

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Hello Jin Young. Thank you for this. This dish sounds great! I haven\'t tried it yet but I know that potato and cream is definitely a good combination.

- T. Beth

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If I could be a good cook, I want to be good in European cuisine especially on France.

>>>> If I could be a good cook, I want to be good in European cuisine especially on French.   

French cuisines are famous among gourmets, and Guide Michelin arose from France, which have helped guide gourmets.

>>>> French cuisine is famous among gourmets, and Guide Michelin came from France which has helped guide gourmets.   

In my taste, I like gratin with bread.

>>>>  OR: Based on my taste preference, I like gratin with bread. 

Gratin is food roasting cheese or bread with this in oven.

>>>> Gratin is the process of roasting cheese and bread in the oven.   

Because foods using potato have been developed in France, French make gratin food using potato and cream.

>>>> OR: Because potato based foods are popular in France, French people make gratin with potato and cream.    

It has soft and sweet taste because of cream and potato, and if there is only a oven, this food can be made easily so it is representative food in France.

>>>>   It has a soft and sweet taste because of the cream and potato. All you need is an oven and this food can be made easily so it is a representative dish in France.  

When I ate that with bread in restaurant in Korea for the first time, I could\'t forget this taste having soft and sweet flavor.

>>>>   When I ate that with bread in a restaurant in Korea for the first time, I could\'t forget the soft and sweet flavor.

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