Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! Nice to meet you! See you in our class! Have a nice day! (^^,)
1. I usually can’t digest well.
>>> Usually, my stomach can\'t digest well.
Maybe my metabolism is not good.
>>> CORRECT!
So I plan to exercise every year, but l didn’t start yet.
>>> So, I plan to exercise every year but until now I haven\'t started yet.
2. When I was 18 years old, l diet a lot. Because l was getting fat.
>>> When I was 18 years old, I was on a diet because I was getting fat.
I tried to diet many times, but I always failed.
>>> I tried many kinds of diet but I always failed.
Moreover my boby condition got bad and l got a stress.
>>> Moreover, my body condition was bad and I was stressed.
So, l don’t diet anymore.
>>> So I didn\'t go on a diet anymore.
l think best dieting is being happy.
>>> I think the best kind of diet is being happy.
_T MICHELLE_
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