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2018-12-24 · 첨삭 강사 Michelle

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1. I usually can’t digest well. Maybe My metabolism is not good. So I plan to exercise every year, but l didn’t start yet. 2. When I was 18 years old, l diet a lot. Because l was getting fat. I tried to diet many times, but I always failed. Moreover my boby condition got bad and l got a stress. So, l don’t diet anymore. l think best dieting is being happy.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! Nice to meet you! See you in our class! Have a nice day! (^^,)


1. I usually can’t digest well.

>>> Usually, my stomach can\'t digest well.


Maybe my metabolism is not good.

>>> CORRECT!


So I plan to exercise every year, but l didn’t start yet.

>>> So, I plan to exercise every year but until now I haven\'t started yet.

 2. When I was 18 years old, l diet a lot.
Because l was getting fat.

>>> When I was 18 years old, I was on a diet because I was getting fat.


 I tried to diet many times, but I always failed.

>>> I tried many kinds of diet but I always failed.


Moreover my boby condition got bad and l got a stress.

>>> Moreover, my body condition was bad and I was stressed.


So, l don’t diet anymore.

>>> So I didn\'t go on a diet anymore.


l think best dieting is being happy.

>>> I think the best kind of diet is being happy.


_T MICHELLE_

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