homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]. Thank you for sending this in. I heard a lot about Jeju Island. It\'s one of the places I would like to visit if given the chance.
- T. Beth
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The highest nountain in Soyth Korea is Halla Mountain.
>>> The highest mountain in South Korea is Halla Mountain.
It is located in Jeju Island.
>>> CORRECT.
I have gone to Jeju Island.
>>> CORRECT.
and I went hiking Halla Mountain.
>>> I also went hiking in Halla mountain.
But That was when I was elementary student.
>>> But that was when I was an elementary student.
>>> OR: But that was when I was in elementary.
I was hazy memory.
>>> OR: I can\'t remember it vividly.
I don\'t like Mountain.
>>> I don\'t like mountains.
so, I\'ve been Jeju Island several times since elementary school.
>>> I\'ve been to Jeju Island several times since elementary.
I went to another area but I didn\'t go to Halla Mountain again.
>>> I went to another area and didn\'t go to Halla Mountain again.
anyway, Jeju Island is very beautiful.
>>> CORRECT. (Anyway, Jeju Island is very beautiful.)
I want to go there again.
>>> CORRECT.
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