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2018-12-26 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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What is the highest mountain in South Korea? Have you ever visited the place? The highest nountain in Soyth Korea is Halla Mountain. It is located in Jeju Island. I have gone to Jeju Island. and I went hiking Halla Mountain. But That was when I was elementary student. I was hazy memory. I don't like Mountain. so, I've been Jeju Island several times since elementary school. I went to another area but I didn't go to Halla Mountain again. anyway, Jeju Island is very beautiful. I want to go there again.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]. Thank you for sending this in. I heard a lot about Jeju Island. It\'s one of the places I would like to visit if given the chance.

- T. Beth

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The highest nountain in Soyth Korea is Halla Mountain.

>>> The highest mountain in South Korea is Halla Mountain.    
 It is located in Jeju Island.
>>> CORRECT.    

I have gone to Jeju Island.
>>>  CORRECT.     
and I went hiking Halla Mountain.
>>>  I also went hiking in Halla mountain.   
But That was when I was elementary student.

>>>  But that was when I was an elementary student.    

>>> OR: But that was when I was in elementary.

I was hazy memory.
>>>  OR: I can\'t remember it vividly.    
I don\'t like Mountain.

>>>  I don\'t like mountains.

so, I\'ve been Jeju Island several times since elementary school.
>>> I\'ve been to Jeju Island several times since elementary.    
I went to another area but I didn\'t go to Halla Mountain again.
>>> I went to another area and didn\'t go to Halla Mountain again.    
anyway, Jeju Island is very beautiful.

>>>  CORRECT.   (Anyway, Jeju Island is very beautiful.)

I want to go there again.

>>>  CORRECT.   

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