Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q.What is your favorite time of the day? Why?
A.I think the best time of the day is when I see Astro. Because I'm pleased with the astro look, cute, handsome, and honey falls from my eyes.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ruby!
I love your new English name. ^^
I enjoyed reading your composition.
Let\'s study more in class so we can finish the book, okay?
~~t. Ally
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I think the best time of the day is when I see Astro.
>> CORRECT!
Because I\'m pleased with the astro look, cute, handsome, and honey falls from my eyes.
>> Because I am pleased with Astro\'s looks, cuteness and handsomeness, they make me feel like honey is falling from my eyes.
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