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My favorite time is talk with Ally teacher
When I talk with her, I receive a big energy
Sometimes I feel melancholy, but she makes me feel better
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
That\'s so sweet of you. ^^
Thank you for sending me this composition.
My heart is melting from joy.
I will always be here to listen to you when you need a helping hand.
~~t. Ally
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My favorite time is talk with Ally teacher
>> My favorite time is when I talk with teacher Ally.
When I talk with her, I receive a big energy.
>> CORRECT!
Sometimes I feel melancholy, but she makes me feel better
>> Sometimes I feel melancholic, but she makes me feel better.
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