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Hello [이름]. Thank you for the effort of answering and sending this in. English is indeed the international language. Therefore, to be international, we have to speak it. Good luck!

- T. Beth

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There are two reasons why English fluency is significant for me.
>>>  CORRECT. 

First, English fluency is one of the important skills for career in Korea.

>>>  CORRECT. 

If I am good at English, more opportunity will be given to me.

>>> If I am good at English, more opportunities will be given to me. 

>>> OR: If I am good in English, it could open more doors of opportunities for me.  

Therefore, English fluency is significant for me to become successful in my future career.
>>> CORRECT.  
Second, I love traveling a foreign country and English fluency is help me enjoy it more.

>>> Second, I love traveling to foreign countries and English fluency would help me enjoy it more.  

There will be many situations that I have to speak English when traveling.

>>>  There will be many situations where I have to speak English when traveling. 

If I can speak English fluently, I can have an active communication with local people and have a great time with various experiences.

>>> CORRECT.  

So, English fluency is significant for me to make trip enjoyable.

>>>  CORRECT.

>>> OR: So, English fluency is significant for me to make the trip more enjoyable.