Homework

What is your favorite story? My favorite story is beauty and the beast. Do you know this story? The reason why I like this story is atmosphere. I means that everything alive in the story. How awesome it is! I feel mysterious. Also, it is so lovely because they are falling in love even though they are different. However, actually they are not different. They have the same mind. Finally, they love each other and they are so happy forever.

 

 

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HOMEWORK:

 

What is your favorite story?

 Please answer in complete sentences.

 

YOUR ANSWER:

 

My favorite story is beauty and the beast. Do you know this story?
The reason why I like this story is atmosphere. I means that everything alive in the story. How awesome it is! I feel mysterious. Also, it is so lovely because they are falling in love even though they are different.
However, actually they are not different. They have the same mind.
Finally, they love each other and they are so happy forever.

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CORRECTIONS:                                                     

 

My favorite story is “Beauty and the Beast.” Do you know this story?
The reason why I like this story is the atmosphere. I mean everything is alive in the story. How awesome it is! I feel mysterious. Also, it is so lovely because they were falling in love even though they are different. Actually, they are not different. They have the same mind.
Finally, they love each other and they are so happy forever.

 

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