Homework

2018-12-28 · 첨삭 강사 Alexia

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What are three things that you are grateful for today? I did not do anything today because I caught a cold, so today is really hard for me, but now I am good because I took a medicine. It really works. Anyway, what are three things that I am grateful for today? First, I think I worked doing well because my mom made a breakfast for me. Second, I was able to take a rest because of my mom and dad. Third, I was not bored because of my Bee. Bee is my dog. I always thank to my family.

강사 첨삭

 

 

Hi Charlie,

 

 Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

 

HOMEWORK:

 

What are three things that you are grateful for today?

 Please answer in complete sentences.

 

YOUR ANSWER:

 

I did not do anything today because I caught a cold, so today is really hard for me, but now I am good because I took a medicine. It really works. Anyway, what are three things that I am grateful for today?
First, I think I worked doing well because my mom made a breakfast for me. Second, I was able to take a rest because of my mom and dad. Third, I was not bored because of my Bee. Bee is my dog. I always thank to my family.

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CORRECTIONS:

 

I did not do anything today because I caught a cold. That is why today is really hard for me. But now I am good because I took a medicine. It really works. Anyway, for the question, “What are three things that I am grateful for today?” the following are my answers; first, I think I worked well because my mom made a breakfast for me. Second, I was able to take a rest because of my mom and dad. Third, I was not bored because of my Bee. Bee is my dog. I always thank my family.

 

 

** Dear [Name], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. 😊 Please take note of the corrections. ^^

 Cheers!! Take care. J

 

  ---------T. Alexia----------    

                       

           

                         

                         

           

             

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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