Homework
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Hi Charlie,
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
HOMEWORK:
What are three things that you are grateful for today?
Please answer in complete sentences.
YOUR ANSWER:
I did not do anything today because I caught a cold, so
today is really hard for me, but now I am good because I took a medicine.
It really works. Anyway, what are three things that I am grateful for
today?
First, I think I worked doing well because my mom made a breakfast for me.
Second, I was able to take a rest because of my mom and dad. Third, I was
not bored because of my Bee. Bee is my dog. I always thank to my family.
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CORRECTIONS:
I did not do anything today because I caught a cold. That is why today is really hard for me. But now I am good because I took a medicine. It really works. Anyway, for the question, “What are three things that I am grateful for today?” the following are my answers; first, I think I worked well because my mom made a breakfast for me. Second, I was able to take a rest because of my mom and dad. Third, I was not bored because of my Bee. Bee is my dog. I always thank my family.
** Dear [Name], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. 😊 Please take note of the corrections. ^^
Cheers!! Take care. J
---------T. Alexia----------
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