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How important are morals in a healthy society? What are the most important morals for citizens to have?
The most important healthy society morals is make a safe city without crimimors and guns.
And care togeter ,for example donate for poor people,and keep the good manner for each people.
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How important are morals in a healthy society? What are the most important morals for citizens to have?
The most important healthy society morals is make a safe city without crimimors and guns.
>> It is very important for a healthy society have a safe city without criminals and guns.
And care togeter ,for example donate for poor people,and keep the good manner for each people.
>> And people should take care of one another and respect each other.
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