Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What are your most memorable moments in our classes? Tell me about some of them. ^^ (in 10 sentences)
1. During the classes, I shared my stories with teacher Ally so often.
2. Teacher Ally told me that her uncle and I came from zero.
3. And we’ve already made some achievements.
4. And she is inspired by people like us.
5. However, I was inspired by teacher Ally as well.
6. She already learned English for herself and she has two jobs.
7. She still has a dream to improve her life and she has been struggling to go forward.
8. Those moments that we shared each stories and encouraged each other are so memorable to me in our classes.
9. In her last correction, she told me that I am her family in a way.
10. That was really touching!
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I guess teacher Lainey will read this composition. It ls for teacher Ally's last homework! See you in class! :)
강사 첨삭
Thank you [이름] ^^
I sent your message to Teacher Ally :))
T. Lainey <\",)))><
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