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Hello [이름]. Thank you for this one. Doing sport or any exercise is really helpful. Did you know that when you exercise, the brain releases happy hormones which is called endorphins and make you feel good. More reason to exercise!
- T. Beth
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There are two main benefits of doing sport.
>>> CORRECT.
Firtst, doing sport helps me to release stress and refresh.
>>> First, doing sport helps me to release stress and refresh.
When I focus on doing sport, I forget the stressful situation.
>>> CORRECT.
Also, I can have feeling of achievement when I get a good score or reach my goal.
>>> Also, I can a have feeling of achievement when I get a good score or reach my goal.
>>> OR: I can also have a sense of achievement when I get a good score or reach my goal.
Second, doing sport makes me have a regular life and become healthy.
>>> CORRECT.
I had taken swimming class every morning from Monday to Friday for 3 months.
>>> CORRECT.
>>> OR: I had been taking swimming classes every morning from Monday to Friday for 3 months.
During that day, I had woken up regularly and started a fresh day.
>>> CORRECT.
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