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2018-12-28 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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Er, I only give gifts at my family's birthday. But I am planning to give gifts at my friend's birthday too. I will start it at next year. It's too late on this year. But I need to remember my friend's birthday first.

강사 첨삭

Hello Seong Won!

It\'s so nice to read your composition again after a while.

You still haven\'t lost your touch.

I know that good things will come to you this 2019.

Good things always happen to hardworking people.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

Er, I only give gifts at my family\'s birthday.
>> I only give gifts to my family on their birthdays.
But I am planning to give gifts at my friend\'s birthday too.
>> However, I\'m planning to give a gift to my friend on her birthday, too.
I will start it at next year.

>> I will do that next year.

It\'s too late on this year.
>> It\'s too late to do it this year.
But I need to remember my friend\'s birthday first.

>> I just need to remember when my friend\'s birthday is.

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