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학생이 쓴 원문
Q.Tell me 3 of your New Year's resolutions.
A.My New Year's resolution is first to Rocky, Baekhug, and hand catching, second is Astro Fan Meeting, third is to go to Concert, and third is to make a wish of 100000000000000000000000000000000000
강사 첨삭
Hi Ruby!
Wow, you really love Astro!
Have a great New Year. ^^
~~t. Ally
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My New Year\'s resolution is first to Rocky, Baekhug, and hand catching, second is Astro Fan Meeting, third is to go to Concert, and third is to make a wish of 100000000000000000000000000000000000
>> My New Year\'s resolution is to keep idolizing Rocky, Baekhug and have the opportunity to touch their hands. My second resolution is to go to an Astro fan meeting. My last resolution is to make 100000000000000000000000000000000000 wishes.
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