homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What is your favorite time of the day? Why?
My favorite time of the day is when I lie on my bed before I sleep.
At that time, I used to reminisce the day I spent even it is not that day.
It is very meaningful to me because I feel that I carve memories in my head.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
That\'s my favorite time of the day too! ^^
I love laying in bed. :D
~~t. Ally
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My favorite time of the day is when I lie on my bed before I sleep.
>> CORRECT!
At that time, I used to reminisce the day I spent even it is not that day.
>> At that time, I would reminisce about the day I spent, even if it\'s not the same day.
It is very meaningful to me because I feel that I carve memories in my head.
>> It is very meaningful for me because I feel like I\'m carving memories inside my head.
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