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Hi [이름]!

Happy New Year! ^^

Thank you for sharing this with me.

I hope all your resolutions will be fulfilled this year! ^^

~~t. Ally

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First, I want loose my weight.

>> First, I want to lose my weight.

 I think I\'m not fat but I want to be little bit more skinny :)

>> I think I\'m not fat but I want to be a bit more skinny. :)

 So I will do exercise.

>> So I will exercise.

 Second, I will study English and French.

>> CORRECT!

 English is essential to me for my successful Australia life.

>> English is an essential asset for me so that I will be successful in my life in Australia.

 I always want to speak 1 more language.

>> I\'ve always wanted to speak more than 1 language.

 But I already learn Chinese although I\'m not good at.

>> But I already learned Chinese, and I am actually good at it. 

 I don\'t want to learn Japanese and I can\'t pronounce \'R\' in Spanish.

>> CORRECT!

 Actually, apart from all these reasons, I am fascinated at French. :)

>>  Actually, aside from all  these reasons, I am fascinated in the French language.

 Third, I will make many foriegn friends.

>> Third, I want to make many foreign friends.

 I am very talkative, sociable person and I hate being alone.

>>I am a very talkative and sociable person, and I hate being alone.

 So I want to make many friends.

>> CORRECT!