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2019-01-02 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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How can you be a good friend? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences I think make a good friends is little diffulcult. And I choose kind and fun friends and start to talking with it. Most important thing is commumication, if the communication is good, it will be my ffiends.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]~

I know that you are friendly. Stay nice so you can gain more friends.^^

~T. Kelly^^ 

How can you be a good friend? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences
I think make a good friends is little diffulcult.

>> I think becoming a good friend is a little difficult.
And I choose kind and fun friends and start to talking with it.

>> And I choose to make friends with people who are kind and fun to talk with.
 Most important thing is commumication, if the communication is good, it will be my ffiends.

>> The most important is communication, if we can communicate well, we can be friends.

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