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2019-01-03 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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This 2019 I will spend a time with people more than Last year My weakness is sociality I admitted this weakness and I should be get over meantime I wasn\'t agree this weakness But I realized my wrong parts I will not ever this mistakes and try to think positive

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!


May 2019 be a year full of happiness and self-growth for you! ^^

See you in class.


~~t. Ally




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This 2019 I will spend a time with people more than Last year 

>> This 2019, I will spend my time with people more than I did last year.


 My weakness is sociality

>> I have a weakness in socializing with others.


 I admitted this weakness and I should be get over

>> I have admitted this weakness and I should get over it.


 meantime I wasn\'t agree this weakness

>> In the meantime, I will not allow this weakness to take over me.


 But I realized my wrong parts

>> I have realized my wrong parts. 


 I will not ever this mistakes and try to think positive

>> I will never make the same mistakes and try to think positive.

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