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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
May 2019 be a year full of happiness and self-growth for you! ^^
See you in class.
~~t. Ally
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This 2019 I will spend a time with people more than Last year
>> This 2019, I will spend my time with people more than I did last year.
My weakness is sociality
>> I have a weakness in socializing with others.
I admitted this weakness and I should be get over
>> I have admitted this weakness and I should get over it.
meantime I wasn\'t agree this weakness
>> In the meantime, I will not allow this weakness to take over me.
But I realized my wrong parts
>> I have realized my wrong parts.
I will not ever this mistakes and try to think positive
>> I will never make the same mistakes and try to think positive.
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