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Hello [이름]. Thank you once again for this one. I heard Korea has a unique and huge fandom for soccer.
- T. Beth
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First, Taekwondo is one of the most famous sports in Korea because it is a Korean national sport.
>>> CORRECT.
It has tournament competing one-on-one by using only their body.
>>> It is a tournament where participants compete one-on-one by using only their body.
In Korea, many children learn taekwondo and people can see many children who are wearing taekwondo uniform.
>>> CORRECT.
>>> OR: In Korea, many children learn taekwondo and it\'s common to see children wearing a taekwondo uniform.
Soccer is also famous in Korea.
>>> CORRECT.
After Korea won the forth grade in the 2002 World Cup, it got to be more famous and popular.
>>> CORRECT.
Especially, many Koreans love to watch a soccer game eating chicken, so all of the chicken restaurants are fulled with people who watch a soccer game during World Cup season.
>>> OR: Especially, many Koreans love to watch a soccer game while eating chicken, so all of the chicken restaurants are crowded with people who watch a soccer game during the World Cup season.
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