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2019-01-03 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

학생이 쓴 원문

This 2019 I will ___________________________. This 2019, I will try to being a better person. I know it\'s a ambiguous purpose. But \'a better person\' covers many things. I want to be better in the personality, health, knowledge and other parts.

강사 첨삭

Hey [이름]!


Thank you so much for sharing this with me. ^^

I hope 2019 is a year of self- betterment and happiness for you!



~~t. Ally



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This 2019, I will try to being a better person.

>> This 2019, I will try to be a better person.


 I know it\'s a ambiguous purpose.

>> CORRECT!


 But \'a better person\' covers many things.

>> CORRECT!


 I want to be better in the personality, health, knowledge and other parts.

>> I want to have a better personality, health, knowledge and many other aspects about me.

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