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강사 첨삭
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Unity and harmony are 2 of the greatest things the world could ever have.
~~t. Ally
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I think the best happiness is love and health of my family.
>> I think the best kind of happiness is love and good health for my family.
Even if I\'m very successful,If my family is not harmonious,I will not feel happy.
>> My success won\'t matter if my family is not harmonious, and in turn, I will not feel happy.
When we have a hard time, we help each other.
>> CORRECT!
If something good happens to each other, we\'ll be doubly pleased.
>> CORRECT!
This is exactly what I think happiness is.
>> CORRECT!
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