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2019-01-08 · 첨삭 강사 Alexia

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: What have you been up to this past New Year\'s day? Please answer in complete sentences:Traditionally,we eat Rice cake soup,and play Yogurt.but we JUST ate Rice cake soup,and watch a movie.

강사 첨삭

Hi Violet,


 Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

 

HOMEWORK:

 

What have you been up to this past New Year’s Day?
Please answer in complete sentences.

 

YOUR ANSWER:


Traditionally,we eat Rice cake soup,and play Yogurt.but we JUST ate Rice cake soup,and watch a movie.

 

CORRECTIONS:

 

Traditionally, we eat rice cake soup and play Yogurt. But this recent New Year’s Day, we just ate rice cake soup and watched a movie.

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** Dear [Name], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. 😊 Please take note of the corrections. ^^

 Cheers!! Take care. J

 

  ---------T. Alexia----------    

 

               

                       

           

                         

                         

           

             

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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