homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Hannah,
Thank you for today’s homework!
Have a nice day and keep up the good work!
Teacher ELLY.
How do you want to spend your holiday?
At first, I want to get some rest comfortably at home.
or>>At first, I want to have some comfortable rest at home.
And then I want to go on a short trip for a few days with my husband.
CORRECT!
or>>Afterwards, I would like to take a few days of short domestic trips with my husband.
I wish a quiet place where it has no phone.
>>I wish for a quiet place where it has no phones.
I read books that I haven`t read and want to watch movies that I haven`t seen.
>>I want to read books that I haven`t read and watch movies that I haven`t seen.
That`s what I really want to do during my holidays.
CORRECT!
or>>Those are the things I would really like to do on my holidays.
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