homework

2019-01-07 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

학생이 쓴 원문

How do you want to spend your holiday? At first I want to get some rest comfortably at home. And then I want to go on a short trip for a few days with my husband. I wish a quiet place where it has no phone. I read books that I haven`t read and want to watch movies that I haven`t seen. That`s what I really want to do during my holidays.

강사 첨삭

Hello Hannah,

Thank you for today’s homework!

Have a nice day and keep up the good work!

Teacher ELLY.

How do you want to spend your holiday?

At first, I want to get some rest comfortably at home.

or>>At first, I want to have some comfortable rest at home.

And then I want to go on a short trip for a few days with my husband.

CORRECT!

or>>Afterwards, I would like to take a few days of short domestic trips with my husband.

I wish a quiet place where it has no phone.

>>I wish for a quiet place where it has no phones.

I read books that I haven`t read and want to watch movies that I haven`t seen.

>>I want to read books that I haven`t read and watch movies that I haven`t seen.

That`s what I really want to do during my holidays.

CORRECT!

or>>Those are the things I would really like to do on my holidays.

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