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2019-01-07 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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Q. What do you like about traveling? A. There are two reasons why I like traveling. First, traveling helps me to relieve stress and refresh. By getting out of my routine and watching something new, I can forget some stressful situations and get a fresh idea. Second, new experiences from traveling could make my perspective broader. During the semester as an exchage student in Australia, I had traveled some cities and met many people. I learned a lot from the new experiences and people.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! Thank you once again for this one. I appreciate the effort. Traveling is indeed beneficial for personal and possibly professional growth. I hope you get to travel more this year.

- T. Beth

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There are two reasons why I like traveling.

>>>> CORRECT.
First, traveling helps me to relieve stress and refresh.

>>>> CORRECT.

By getting out of my routine and watching something new, I can forget some stressful situations and get a fresh idea.

>>>> CORRECT.

>>>> OR: By getting out of my usual routine and seeing something new, I can forget about some stressful situations and get a fresh idea.
Second, new experiences from traveling could make my perspective broader.

>>>> CORRECT.

During the semester as an exchage student in Australia, I had traveled some cities and met many people.

>>>> CORRECT.

I learned a lot from the new experiences and people.

>>>> CORRECT.

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