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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I am so happy to hear how much your family means to you. ^^
See you in class!
~~t. Ally
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My one true happiness is that all my faily members are happy
>> My one true happiness is for all my family members to be happy as well.
Korea have a large family culture
>> Korea has a large family culture.
So most of korean thinks that the most importance is family
>> So most Koreans think that the most important thing is a family.
The answer about yesterday\'s question
>> As for my answer in yesterday\'s question,
When I tripped country, I bought a present of region specialities for my friend
>> When I took a trip out of the country, I bought a present from different region specialties for my friend.
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