homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hey [이름]!
That really is annoying!
I agree with you.
Especially when you\'re sleeping and you hear that loud noise. :(
~~t. Ally
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As you know, the best thing that I annoy is the sounds of the engines.
>> As you know, the thing that annoys me most is the sound of engines.
When I heard that sound, I used to say \"I want to detach that engines!!\".
>> Whenever I hear that specific sound, I would always say, \" I want to detach the engines\".
Some people think that the sound can show how the vehicle is good, but I think it is really selfish thought.
>> Some people think that the loudness of the car can show how strong the vehicle is, but I think it\'s a really selfish thought.
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