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Some people using rude word annoy me
I think word is very important
Bad communication is maybe kill to people\'s mind and even people\'s physical side
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!
I agree with you. ^^
It\'s quite offensive to hear rude words.
Especially if it comes from the people who matter to us.
~~t. Ally
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Some people using rude word annoy me
>> Some people who use rude words annoy me.
I think word is very important
>> I think words are very important.
Bad communication is maybe kill to people\'s mind and even people\'s physical side
>> Bad communication can kill a person\'s mind, and even, to an extent, the person himself.
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