homework
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What takes up most of your time?
sleeping time takes up most of my time because I sleep 7~8 hours every day. Second, studing takes many times too.
I want to make playng time takes up most of your time.
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sleeping time takes up most of my time because I sleep 7~8 hours every day.
>> Sleeping time takes up most of my time because I sleep 7-8 hours every day.
Second, studing takes many times too.
>> Also, studying takes up my time, too.
I want to make playng time takes up most of your time.
>> I also want to make time for playing.
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