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Q. What can turn your day into a bad one?
A. In my case, when I had trouble with friends or listened to some words that offended me, I used to spend bad day. I couldn\'t concentrate on my tasks because the words were reminded in my mind repeatly.
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Q. What can turn your day into a bad one?
A. In my case, when I had trouble with friends or listened to some words that offended me, I used to spend bad day.
>>In my case, when I had some troubles with my friends or when I heard some words that offended me, I used to spend a bad day.
I couldn\'t concentrate on my tasks because the words were reminded in my mind repeatly.
>>I couldn\'t concentrate on my tasks because I remember the words I’ve heard against me and it kept playing in my mind repeatedly.
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