Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Thank you again for your ideas on today’s homework!
Have a wonderful day and talk to you tomorrow!
Teacher ELLY.
Q. Where do you usually go when you eat out?
A. I usually go to a Janpanese restaurant or an Italian one because my family, friends, and I all like that.
>>I usually go to a Japanese restaurant or an Italian one because my family, friends, and I all like this kind of thing.
Moreover, I usually go to Shinchon, Hongdae, Sungsu, etc in Seoul because there are many popular restaurants and coffee shops.
>>Moreover, I usually go to Shinchon, Hongdae, Sungsu, etc., in Seoul, because there are many popular restaurants and coffee shops in these areas.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.