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2019-01-09 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

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What should you prepare for this time of year? I always make plans for a year before the beginning of the year. There are five goals this year. First, I spend a lot of time with my family. Second, do my best in my work. Third, I read more books. Fourth, I enjoy studying English. Finally, exercise regularly. I hope to achieve this goal well and smile at the end of the year.

강사 첨삭

Hello Hannah,

Thank you for your answer in today’s homework!

Have an awesome day and just continue sharing your ideas!

Teacher ELLY.

What should you prepare for this time of year?

I always make plans for a year before the beginning of the year.

CORRECT!

or>>I always prepare a one-year plan ahead of time, before the new year starts.

There are five goals this year.

>>There are five goals this year.

CORRECT!

or>>I have created 5 goals that I need to do for this year.

First, I spend a lot of time with my family.

>>First, I will spend a lot of time with my family.

or>>First, I will have more time hanging out with my family.

Second, do my best in my work.

>>Second, I will do my best at my work.

or>>Second, I will work harder and give it my all.

Third, I read more books.

>>Third, I will read more books.

or>>Third, I will try to double my book readings.

Fourth, I enjoy studying English.

>>Fourth, I will enjoy studying English.

or>>Fourth, I will have more fun in learning the English language.

Finally, exercise regularly.

>>Finally, I will exercise regularly.

I hope to achieve this goal well and smile at the end of the year.

>>I hope to achieve these goals real well and get to smile at the end of the year.

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